Writing OUT OF COMPETITION – part two: the prophecy

In the spirit of James Joyce’s explanation of how he wrote Ulysses, I will lay down the writing markers in my creation of Out of Competition.

Out of Competition is a cracked mirror reversal of Tolstoy’s War and Peace.

In terms of the underlying history – instead of a French coalition force under the leadership of an aging, misguided and infirm Napoleon, making his extraordinary blunders in the 1812 invasion of Russia, Out of Competition tracks the behaviour of some Russians who “attend-invade” an annual film festival in France on the Cote d’Azur, in the seaside town of Renne-Sur-Mer.

While Napoleon blundered into and around Russia for nearly six months, summer going fall heading into full winter, my characters blunder around a French Riviera film festival for just over one fortnight in spring.

Out of Competition fortuitously foresees unfolding history in the 21st century.

In 2010, after reading the Pevear and Volokhonsky translation of Tolstoy’s War and Peace, I decided on a Russian invasion of a French Film Festival as the story basis to my novel. Then in 2014, again 2022, Russia invaded Ukraine.

In the writing 2014 onward, my description of street violence appear, demonstrators protesting for a democratic contest, was later mirrored in the Black Lives Matter demonstrations. I had no idea these protests would explode during Trump 1.

In late 2019-20, I completed the first draft of a storyline, highlighting democracy as fundamental to the good operation of a film festival, without any idea how the democratic principles and processes would be attacked in a nation with a solid history in democracy, such as the United States. Writing my novel, I never thought American democracy could be so fragile. I am still bewildered by the rapid disintegration of it at the hands of this president who has been adjudicated by American Courts of Law as a sex-offender and a felon.

As well, in the writing my story’s denouement, writing it in 2021, one character, Merryl, manages to organise an extraordinary 2 billion dollar worldwide box-office in her self-written and directed Reinvasion of the Body Snatchers. At the time, I hadn’t even heard of Greta Gerwig and Margot Robbie’s plans to make Barbie. The first I learnt of their film was in 2023.

My novel became a prophecy of their success, and other matters on several levels.  And if anyone doubts the truth of this, I have digital copies to demonstrate what I am saying.

Writing OUT OF COMPETITION – part one: the idea

Out of Competition began as an idea in 2000. It was written in France. Attending a French film festival I saw a film producer grandstanding his way through a series of well-constructed lies. Present that day in a film tent, I thought to myself: this guy needs analysis. At the same time, the recently-ended Soviet Union was embarking upon an economic march over to join in with the West.

Pencilling down ideas I came up with a couple of sketchy characters, one American, one Russian, similar and unique – types who wanted attention, enjoyed power, and were destined to meet, maybe do business together.

Other ideas and characters came into my head as a story began shaping up, but I couldn’t find a central idea to unify everything.

As the novel’s progress slowed my idea faded into the background. Where to begin and what is this about stalled me. I moved on to writing two other books and stopped thinking about the film tent inspired idea. Then in 2010 I read the translation of War and Peace by Richard Pevear and Lara Volokonsky. Hooked immediately, I read it once, then twice.

The translating team’s stated intention was to return War and Peace to Tolstoy’s original Russian language style. It was time. A series of English translators had turned Leo Tolstoy into a copy of a 19th century English novelist. The now well-known Tolstoy test: “The children rode the chairs to Moscow” showed Tolstoy not mutating chairs into carriages. Tolstoy’s children needed no linguistic bridge for their imagination. Pevear & Volokonsky understood this clearly, and translating simply, translated Tolstoy carefully following the original Russian of W&P. Bursts of French appeared again. Then the French culture and language influencing Russian life were torn asunder when Napoleon invaded in 1812.

I had my novel’s subject: Russians invading a French film festival.

OUT OF COMPETITION

Kenneth Patchen Award for the innovative novel

‘Laugh out loud funny’

Carla M. Wilson

5 OUT OF 5 STARS

Intelligent, provocative and fun

Cherry Jam UK, October 16, 2024 Review

Humorously subversive. It goes so fast I read it in two days. A must for anyone with a love of cinema and its festivals. And the most irreverent novel written about the South of France

5 OUT OF 5 STARS

Ten Years is Enough!

Read-fest UK, 9 September 2025

A sharp satire about democracy set in a Riviera Film Festival facing collapse as young cineastes demonstrate against privilege and lack of transparency in the annual voting shakedown, the novel opening with the kidnap off the streets of a desperate bankrupt Hollywood producer cadging money wherever he can

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The Horror of Big Whitey

Sharks into cities doesn’t go – but they do – and too often these days.

With this recent attack on a woman at Sydney’s Coogee Beach, I have been thinking of my swims, a few bays around at Bondi Beach many years ago, in particular, one fine day. I was convinced by another to swim across the bay, starting out from Bondi Icebergers Club pool.

There is deep water behind the sand bank surf break. We swam across and back, perhaps 1000m, more because the beach itself is one kilometre. So we swam perhaps 1500m across and back. I can tell you I thought of sharks the whole way across and back. Were they watching us? Probably.

Are we too kind to them, the Great White in particular, giving them an all-year-round free city pass? Is it time for another novel on the horror of Big Whitey?